Falling for you - First draft

Here is the first draft of our music video for 'Falling For You'. After showing it to our fellow peers and teachers we got positive and negative feedback:

Positive:

1. A lot of enigma codes so keeps the audience interested
2. Good high quality shots, especially in the water
3. Good range of shots
4. Clever effects where James is swimming
5. Clever cuts on the beat
6. Enjoyed the reverse shot of the water splashing Ben

Negative:

1. First shot is shaky even after stabilizing it
2. Some thought it cut too quickly as it is a slow song
3. Some didn't like the contrast from the swimming pool to the river and the road
4. One beat doesn't cut on time so is out of sync
5. The shot of Ben walking towards the camera is too long